ManWithNoName
TheBrownDog
Thought I'd start this thread here since it's most likely people here have read it.
Lover of Lenny Hayes and football books so I thought I'd give this a go. But anyone else bought this book and thought it absolutely terrible? By which I obviously mean the writing, not the man himself. It's just awfully written. I'm about two and a half chapters in and there's no flow to it. It feels like a bunch of sentences cobbled together. Editing error in the second paragraph wasn't a good start but it's shocking. Keeps jumping between referring to people by their first/last names so I get confused who they're talking about.
Jason Phelan (the bloke who actually wrote it) has a lot to answer for if the rest is like this and he's buggered up a potentially great football book. Or is it just me?
Lover of Lenny Hayes and football books so I thought I'd give this a go. But anyone else bought this book and thought it absolutely terrible? By which I obviously mean the writing, not the man himself. It's just awfully written. I'm about two and a half chapters in and there's no flow to it. It feels like a bunch of sentences cobbled together. Editing error in the second paragraph wasn't a good start but it's shocking. Keeps jumping between referring to people by their first/last names so I get confused who they're talking about.
Jason Phelan (the bloke who actually wrote it) has a lot to answer for if the rest is like this and he's buggered up a potentially great football book. Or is it just me?