Mobbs
A Large Portion, Yes
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really good stuff Danoz
I looked through for things i didn't like ... attempting to keep the approach consistent, and found very little that I'd like to change.
Boncer v Trolls:
Just felt that quoting elements of boncer's tirade detracted from the concept of a "summary", and want to suggest the following truncation.
New Teams = New Activity:
I've always maintained the fantasy element in this data, ie treating the competition as a fair dinkum league and not some role-playing game on a messageboard (staying "in-character"). So I'd like to swap the above with:
Thoughts on my revisions?
I looked through for things i didn't like ... attempting to keep the approach consistent, and found very little that I'd like to change.
Boncer v Trolls:
Sensationally admin boncer34 blocked the bid, stating the team were "a bunch of shabbily thrown together noobs plus the leagues biggest flog at that time." He also said they were a "horrible idea and blind Freddy could see they would fail." The Trolls maintained their guise as a new team in waiting throughout Season 14, but disbanded as they failed to maintain the energy that had seen their rise in the first place.
Just felt that quoting elements of boncer's tirade detracted from the concept of a "summary", and want to suggest the following truncation.
Sensationally admin boncer34 blocked the bid, emphasising his stance in a "stinging critique." The Trolls maintained their guise as a new team in waiting throughout Season 14, but disbanded as they failed to maintain the energy that had seen their rise in the first place.
New Teams = New Activity:
A huge influx of new posters accommodated the introduction of the two new teams leading to the highest levels of activity ever seen on the board.
I've always maintained the fantasy element in this data, ie treating the competition as a fair dinkum league and not some role-playing game on a messageboard (staying "in-character"). So I'd like to swap the above with:
A huge influx of new players accommodated the introduction of the two new teams leading to the highest levels of activity seen in the competition's history..
Thoughts on my revisions?