I think adding unnecessary adverbs only dilutes the "quality" of Hagdorn's article.What's wrong with this wording?
This article sounds like an old school article which doesn't cater for the modern verbal ******y.
It hearkens back to the days of the old game reviews.
Though the word proficiency is just utterly horrible and should be banned.
Just piss it off please Jootube.
Hopefully all clubs follow.
Did we need to know that Robertson's run-up was "athletic and rhythmic"? Probably not.
Is there a more accurate, and simple way of saying "eradicate a decline in scoring proficiency"? Almost certainly.