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Awesome work Coolknot, your best yet I think.

I reckon you could even play around with it and reverse the colours (ala swans 'heritage jumper' last year) you would have an even better jumper :thumbsu:
 
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Awesome work Coolknot, your best yet I think.

I reckon you could even play around with it and reverse the colours (ala swans 'heritage jumper' last year) you would have an even better jumper :thumbsu:
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Bloody hell coolknot your designing has improved out of sight.
Who'd ya hire to do that for ya? :p
Nah I'm kidding, great work.

Only thing I'd change would be to get rid of the monogram. At that size, it's barely visible and becomes unneccesary.
 
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This would have to be one of my favourite creations yet.
And rightly so. The idea is great, but the execution just isn't quite there.

It's only a few small(ish) things, but would you like me to give you a few tips on what to fix up?
 
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And rightly so. The idea is great, but the execution just isn't quite there.

It's only a few small(ish) things, but would you like me to give you a few tips on what to fix up?

Sure, teach me your tricks master :p
 
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Sure, teach me your tricks master

Ok. These may be small but I'm just trying to help.

  1. West Coast's apparel sponsor is Puma, so the Reebok template shouldn't be used. Try checking out the "2010 Jumper Guide" thread for info on all the club's guernseys.
  2. On that neck, you abandoned the actual logo. On all templates, don't fill in every pixel of the logo, making sure there's no grey or white bits you can still see.
  3. The design is pretty cool. I see how you've tried to "wrap" the eagle around the side of the guernsey. But there's a gap between one part of it and the other, separated by those side panels (filled in gold). If you want to try the wrap effect, don't make the eagle stop, or better yet use the other Reebok template that doesn't have side panels. Remember however that West Coast use Puma, and Puma don't have side panels.
  4. The eagle on the back above the number looks a tad too big. Maybe just the eagle head, without the wing? Or maybe nothing at all?
  5. It's hard to see with the pic being a little blurred, but with a navy blue back you probably don't need a yellow outline around white numbers - they can just be all white.
  6. The sponsor on the front might be a touch big - maybe downsize it a tiny bit. If this is an away guernsey, the Hungry Jack's logo is on the front (which you've done, good job). If it's a home, the SGIO logo goes on the front and the sponsors are reversed - just to let you know.
  7. As for the one on the back, it's down a bit too low. And also another small thing - the SGIO logo on the back is a fair bit more rectangular, it has a lot of white space and both sides of the logo - check out the 2010 Jumper Guide again.
  8. I'm guessing it's an away guernsey, yes? If so, you're going to have white shorts - unless you're Richmond of the 80's and want to experiment with yellow shorts.
  9. Once again the Reebok logo has been neglected - I'd fill it in navy blue, making sure not to leave out any gaps.
  10. Also, you've left out West Coast's shorts sponsor - it's Perth Precast.
  11. The socks are OK but the yellow bar is a little bit too big for my liking - maybe just make it a tad smaller, or move it up a bit, leaving out the navy at the top.
  12. As for the bottom of the socks - this is just personal preference, but a lot of people leave it white - it just looks nicer.
Now I hope this isn't too big, and I'm sorry I've taken so long to get back to you - I've been hooked on the tennis.

Hope all goes well,
Gibbsy.
 

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I'm not usually hot on this sort of thing, but I hope it's a coincidence.
The similarities are definitely there, but I'd like to give him the benefit of the doubt.
 
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Bloody hell coolknot your designing has improved out of sight.
Who'd ya hire to do that for ya? :p
Nah I'm kidding, great work.

Only thing I'd change would be to get rid of the monogram. At that size, it's barely visible and becomes unneccesary.
Will be even better next month. Next month I'm gonna download a logo creator that cory uses also.
 

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