- Banned
- #26
FMD, Barrett has gone the whole smorgasbord of his shitty writing tics this week.
If ...
we've been a massive fan of Hipwood from the moment we first saw him in 2016 ...
then ...
nothing has changed. Would just love for last week's performance to become the norm, or at least something like the norm. He's certainly capable of that.
What the hell is this? The hypothetical premise is once again not even a hypothetical. That's standard by now. But the upshot isn't even an upshot - he simply says "nothing has changed". So this is basically a stupid, convoluted way of saying "I've rated Hipwood since 2016". But of course he also has to refer to himself as "we" for some neurotic reason. Does he think it sounds more thinky, like he's a one-man consensus and that makes his bullshit sound more authoritative?
But wait, there's more.
If ...
you lined up Cyril's best 50 moments on an AFL ground ...
then ...
it's going to stack up very nicely against anyone's best 50 in the history of the game. And here's a twist – we reckon there's a chance he will play AFL again. Happy to put $10 on that. And if you, too, choose to do so, please bet responsibly.
Argh! Very nicely?! Do you have an editor? You've been writing for a living for 20-odd years and no one has told you this is pissweak? And why do you keep calling yourself "we"? You've got a truly freaky Norman Bates vibe going on.
We think this. We think that. Me and Mother.
If ...
we've been a massive fan of Hipwood from the moment we first saw him in 2016 ...
then ...
nothing has changed. Would just love for last week's performance to become the norm, or at least something like the norm. He's certainly capable of that.
What the hell is this? The hypothetical premise is once again not even a hypothetical. That's standard by now. But the upshot isn't even an upshot - he simply says "nothing has changed". So this is basically a stupid, convoluted way of saying "I've rated Hipwood since 2016". But of course he also has to refer to himself as "we" for some neurotic reason. Does he think it sounds more thinky, like he's a one-man consensus and that makes his bullshit sound more authoritative?
But wait, there's more.
If ...
you lined up Cyril's best 50 moments on an AFL ground ...
then ...
it's going to stack up very nicely against anyone's best 50 in the history of the game. And here's a twist – we reckon there's a chance he will play AFL again. Happy to put $10 on that. And if you, too, choose to do so, please bet responsibly.
Argh! Very nicely?! Do you have an editor? You've been writing for a living for 20-odd years and no one has told you this is pissweak? And why do you keep calling yourself "we"? You've got a truly freaky Norman Bates vibe going on.
We think this. We think that. Me and Mother.
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