Mercurial89
Brownlow Medallist
I think TPM was a mistake, timeline wise. It's too early of a start. Episode I should have been just before AOTC, and finished as the Clone Wars start. You can keep some of the pieces of TPM - Maul, Qui-Gon, Anakin entering the Temple late - but rearrange them, and leave stuff like the Naboo blockade as a little bit of historical dialogue. Anakin should've entered the temple as a teenager/nearly adult. Maul and Dooku should've appeared to have been the Sith duo. Obi-Wan should spend most of the film chasing clues about the clones, which never really went anywhere in AOTC, but comes to the rescue of Qui-Gon and Anakin, too late to save the former. He can then blame Anakin for Qui-Gon's death to some degree, creating a further tension between them that Sidious takes advantage of.
If you keep the Naboo blockade as a historical event, then introduce that as the place where Padme met Obi-Wan, which also creates romantic tension with Anakin (who can become enamoured with her much more believably in this movie, and then have the marriage take place in the new episode II). This makes his interpretation of her betrayal in III more understandable. Anakin should have three primary relationships: brother figure Obi-Wan, wife Padme, father figure Palpatine. Obi-Wan should be suspicious of Palpatine's motives from the start, and Palpatine doing his best to make Anakin distrust Obi-Wan. Padme should trust Palpatine at first, but over the three films become increasingly wary and eventually side with Obi-Wan instead, fueling Anakin's 'betrayal' narrative further.
The basic pieces are there, they just weren't put together well.
Everytime I think about these types of things I wonder whether the story works better in TV series format.
More slow burn throughout seasons of the relationships, building and breaking of trust, investigating the clones. These would be good events within a season that may pack more punch if they had a bit more time spent developing them which you just can't do in a movie.