Review Open Letter From James Hird

[acursi08]

What a great coach and leader we have in James Hird!
Have a read. Gets you excited for the next few Years. Go Dons!

http://www.essendonfc.com.au/news/a/Open-letter-from-James-Hird/10044

 

[Kyptastic]

 

[Kong]

Liked this bit:

Do not listen to the noise that comes from outside. Don’t listen to the knockers or the critics. Believe in where we are going, understand where we need to get better and work hard every day to get better as individuals and as a team. For as disappointing as the year finished, I know the players are well on their way to forming something very special.

 

[lamaros]

Needs a bit of editorial work there, but the general 'gist' is good.

 

[VelvetSledge]

I like the bit where he mentioned Goddard.

I like Goddard.

 

[lamaros]

Jobe looked a bit glum eh!

 

[mad_monkey_j]

Needs a bit of editorial work there, but the general 'gist' is good.

Yeah I thought it was written pretty poorly. Lots of repetition and seem to have forgotten how to use the space bar, otherwise the underlying concept was pretty good.

 

[Bunk Moreland]

Spelling and grammar issues abound.

The great man did not write this. Just look at him!

Time to sack the PA.

But yeah, overall message is good.

 

[Kaiser Powser]

What a legend.

 

[lamaros]

Spelling and grammar issues abound.

The great man did not write this. Just look at him!

Time to sack the PA.

But yeah, overall message is good.

Yeah it's a very half-arsed transcript.

 

[Jade]

Open letter from Hird.

Translation:

"blah blah blah, blah blah, we're coming for you bitches, blah blah".

 

[Oh Tayteridge]

**** Hirdy's so for me.

 

[grugsticles]

I think ol Jim may have had a few sherbets hence the need for the ore written script.
I for one would love to sit in on one if his team motivational talks for ANZAC day, the man demands your attention.

 

[Eleven 38]

We have a very expensive coaching panel, and we are building new training facilities. Which means cut backs have to be made in other areas like the staff writers. I failed year 10 english and I could write a better letter than that.

 

[Eleven 38]

I did like what it was about though!! i'm sure the writers are learning..

 

[Silly Billy]

Got a tingle in my pants after reading that.

 

[Lord Nicholson]

I'm sold already, Jim.

****ing deliver.

 

[bombermick]

Liked his introduction about the 84/85 sides.

I'm pumped about getting a BJ ... er signing BJ, but I'm glad he's ramming it down their throats we've done **** all for a decade.

 

[Bob Neil]

Hope you don't mind a visitor dropping in - just wanted to say that I watched the video of Mark McVeigh's speech at your Creighton Medal ceremony and thought it was great stuff. Clearly bleeds for the club and you've gotta think that your young blokes seeing that and having been mentored by a guy like that would bode well for your future. Lots of shit gets talked in the media but at the end of the day footy clubs are a pretty bloody good place!

 

[Shane Hird]

He doesn't have to say all that really.

Just a simple " We know what we're doing..just sit back and watch " would be fine.