Entertainment & Music Song contest Part 2, Host: roo2macca, theme: celestial, votes due Monday 6pm AEST

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My little brother just discovered rock and roll
My little brother just discovered rock and roll
My little brother just discovered rock and roll
He's only twenty two and he's out of control
 

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One of my favourite Paul Kelly songs (I have a few!) I can't find a good quality clip of the album recording. Not bad live version below, but the song sounds better with atmospheric organ and the female harmonies on the chorus.

This was my original nom, but then I remembered most people don't care about the words of a song and don't care how well a song fits a theme (except when it was 'musicals' round :eek:)



On a crowded beach in a distant time
At the height of summer see a boy of five
At the water's edge so nimble and free
Jumping over the ripples looking way out to sea

Now a man comes up from amongst the throng
Takes the young boy's hand and his hand is strong
And the child feels safe, yeah the child feels brave
As he's carried in those arms up and over the waves

Deeper water, deeper water, deeper water, calling him on

Let's move forward now and the child's seventeen
With a girl in the back seat tugging at his jeans
And she knows what she wants, she guides with her hand
As a voice cries inside him - I'm a man, I'm a man!

Deeper water, deeper water, deeper water, calling him on

Now the man meets a woman unlike all the rest
He doesn't know it yet but he's out of his depth
And he thinks he can run, it's a matter of pride
But he keeps coming back like a cork on the tide

Well the years hurry by and the woman loves the man
Then one night in the dark she grabs hold of his hand
Says 'There, can you feel it kicking inside!'
And the man gets a shiver right up and down his spine

Deeper water, deeper water, deeper water, calling him on

So the clock moves around and the child is a joy
But Death doesn't care just who it destroys
Now the woman gets sick, thins down to the bone
She says 'Where I'm going next, I'm going alone'

Deeper water, deeper water

On a distant beach lonely and wild
At a later time see a man and a child
And the man takes the child up into his arms
Takes her over the breakers, to where the water is calm

Deeper water, deeper water, deeper water, calling them on
 
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Beautiful song about a son who never got along with his father, couldn't measure up, etc. He felt relieved when the old man died, but it's only afterwards, he realises how much he misses him and feels guilty. He has a new perspective on their relationship and where his dad was coming from. The lyrical inspiration came from a dinner party conversation Tweedy had with a stranger (hence the song title acknowledgement: For Jane Smiley's boyfriend)

Best track on the album, I think. Some people reckon it's boring and goes too long, but I just get lost in the simple melody and accompaniment.

So good.
 
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