whist there's some good points in that list, almost none of them are "plot holes" does no one care about film anymore?
if you want to critique the film just do it.
i stopped here when it became apparent most of it was filler for example this great egg:
Finn is an ex-janitor who goes AWOL from a Stormtrooper force numbering in the tens of thousands.
what? how did you think he was a janiter? he's a ******* stormtrooper.
han asks: where were you stationed when you worked here.
fin answers: sanitation
this doesn't mean he was a janitor it means he was a stormtrooper who was assigned to the sanitation facility.
its A) a 4th wall joke, implying how useless he was a stormy that he was assigned to a useless position and B) a plot device to show how much he cared for a woman he's known for about 2 days.
see the critique here should not be how does a janitor go AWOL and how the first order shouldn't care. in case you missed it, the empire and the first order are space nazis there all about discipline and shit. they aren't going to say well a stormtrooper just turned traitor and helped a rebel pilot escape who may have the information we're looking for and killed several of our people in doing so, lets do nothing. even though they had bigger fish to fry they'd still kill him onsite for being a traitor. hence why he wants to get as far away from them as possible.
the critique