Workshop Template Feedback Thread

[johnfrombrazil]

Hey hey, long time no see, mates. I was playing with my football (soccer) template, and did this. Some criticism over the template?

 

[Spanna_]

Hey hey, long time no see, mates. I was playing with my football (soccer) template, and did this. Some criticism over the template?

Love it! My only piece of feedback would be to make the jumper slightly bigger.

 

[johnfrombrazil]

Love it! My only piece of feedback would be to make the jumper slightly bigger.

The jumper is tucked in. I've tried to un-tuck, but isn't working as I planned. Some help about it?

 

[leccanation]

2nd Progress Update
-Added Boots and Number and Name Fonts

 

[Cody_]

looks good, might wanna add socks and boots for the back, looks odd without them.

Also can't this thread be merged with the template feedback thread?

 

[leccanation]

looks good, might wanna add socks and boots for the back, looks odd without them.

Also can't this thread be merged with the template feedback thread?

Yeah, also do you know if you want the arms and hands for example to be on top of the name and numbers on the jumper but not make the arm go on top of the shirt layer?
I didn't want to put it on the template thread because i will post quite regularly and will clog up the thread.

 

[Cody_]

Try using clipping masks, also may I suggest you retrace the shirt and smooth it out along with make it a tad longer.

 

[Jack Stevens]

Are you going to upload the template for others to use? I'd like to use it for competitions

 

[leccanation]

3rd Progress Update
- Designs on and logos
- Boots and socks on back
- Hair put on mans head

 

[leccanation]

Are you going to upload the template for others to use? I'd like to use it for competitions

Yeah sure do you want it with all the designs on it?
I will have to do more work on it though

 

[Cody_]

what a head

 

[Klim]

Hey guys. I've just made myself an NRL Card template which I will be working into a portfolio. Was wondering if there is any flaws in it which I could fix up and present more efficiently.

 

[Bryce_Jersey17]

Hey guys. I've just made myself an NRL Card template which I will be working into a portfolio. Was wondering if there is any flaws in it which I could fix up and present more efficiently.
View attachment 158008

Perhaps the two chevrons below the one with the club name could be in club colours? Also, the details text might need to be a tad larger and maybe add something like date of birth and place of birth (or even club they were recruited from) or the player number

 

[Bacon Warrior]

Are you going to upload the template for others to use? I'd like to use it for competitions

Haha, you prick.

 

[rabbitoh21]

Hey guys. I've just made myself an NRL Card template which I will be working into a portfolio. Was wondering if there is any flaws in it which I could fix up and present more efficiently.
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I reckon a better background to the pics ala the old style cards with club logo backgrounds, and yeah some club colours on the card somewhere would be toparoo too.

 

[Fizzler]

3rd Progress Update
- Designs on and logos
- Boots and socks on back
- Hair put on mans headView attachment 158003

Some tips.
-Retrace Jersey and shorts.
-Trace all of the arms again and do the hands as well so you can have them showing on back and no hands on back
-Do shading. Greater Gattsby did a tutorial not long ago.

 

[Fizzler]

Yeah, also do you know if you want the arms and hands for example to be on top of the name and numbers on the jumper but not make the arm go on top of the shirt layer?
I didn't want to put it on the template thread because i will post quite regularly and will clog up the thread.

Do sleeves separately.

 

[Cody_]

Update:

Here is my template with sleeves atm


Without sleeves:

Anything that needs fixing? thoughts?

 

[Bryce_Jersey17]

The long sleeves look very crinkled just under the armpit. Perhaps you could smooth that out a bit?

 

[Dylan8]

Update:

Here is my template with sleeves atm
View attachment 158840

Without sleeves:
View attachment 158842
Anything that needs fixing? thoughts?

Is this illegible? Yes. I couldn't be bothered explaining myself in type.


The question marks are about the unkempt sleeves v the straight, flat look of the rest of the template. Keep it consistent.

Ask me what any of this means too btw if you're unsure.

 

[Fizzler]

Cody, this is more about your designs rather than you template. You seem to rush your designs. Look at your bottom design in particular. A west coast design with "YELLOW AND BLACK" inside the collar, Port Adelaide Home on the side, Port sponsors and 1870 in the back. There is no rush in this, it's not a competition. Take your time.
EDIT: Also Te top design has we are Port Adelaide in the collar, West Coast labels and another teams design (Traralgon Maroons is my guess).

 

[Cody_]

Is this illegible? Yes. I couldn't be bothered explaining myself in type.
View attachment 158854

The question marks are about the unkempt sleeves v the straight, flat look of the rest of the template. Keep it consistent.

Ask me what any of this means too btw if you're unsure.

thanks, I could read most of it, but I worked out what it said (eventually). I am planning on (most would recommend) retracing for smooth sleeves instead of the realistic sorta shit.

Cody, this is more about your designs rather than you template. You seem to rush your designs. Look at your bottom design in particular. A west coast design with "YELLOW AND BLACK" inside the collar, Port Adelaide Home on the side, Port sponsors and 1870 in the back. There is no rush in this, it's not a competition. Take your time.
EDIT: Also Te top design has we are Port Adelaide in the collar, West Coast labels and another teams design (Traralgon Maroons is my guess).

lol. I am not that stupid, it is just an example of what goes where. Obviously West Coast aren't yellow and black etc, I was just two lazy to make a proper design. I will upload the wings (West Coast design) in jumper ideas later as part of my plans to #returnthewings

Thanks for the feedback Fizz, Dylan and Bryce

 

[Cody_]

So I officially ditched the gradients for good and had a go at making shading along with fixing some things up.
Thoughts?

 

[Fizzler]

So I officially ditched the gradients for good and had a go at making shading along with fixing some things up.
Thoughts?
View attachment 160582

It's looking pretty good. Maybe turn the shading down down on the collar/cuffs for this image, but turn it up on darker colours.

 

[Bryce_Jersey17]

The height of socks make it look a bit like they've been shrunk in the wash