Workshop Template Feedback Thread

[Bryce_Jersey17]

(DJ scratch) Slim SHADING.

Do it.

Let him finish the darn template first!

 

[Spanna_]

Let him finish the darn template first!

But I can see the potential.

 

[Gibbsy]

New Update:

Not bad, the lines aren't straight though, they're increasing in width and it looks to be an accident. It's a cool design otherwise (shame about the white box for the sponsor)

 

[leccanation]

 

[Bryce_Jersey17]

I'm assuming this is made in Illustrator. If so, you may want to look at where the clipping mask is situated. At the moment, your green lines extend over the grey outlines, rather than being contained by them

 

[leccanation]

I'm assuming this is made in Illustrator. If so, you may want to look at where the clipping mask is situated. At the moment, your green lines extend over the grey outlines, rather than being contained by them

My clipping mask doesn't have a stroke while the base does

 

[NM_Mitchell]

Giving some shading a crack

Is it worthwhile continuing?
There's still a fair bit of tinkering to do in terms of opacity and shapes, but it's reminding me of my CAN-AM entry, which isn't necessarily a good thing in my eyes.

Also, I've been tinkering with some new numbers, should be coming soon.

 

[Dylan8]

I think your jumper shape is too flat - as though it was hanging up on a coat hanger - for shading to look right.

By all means give it a crack though.

 

[SC_GC]

I have done a first pass on making a soccer template for the FLO and as such was wondering if there were any large issues with it such as the proportions that should be fixed before I progress any further with it.

 

[Andonis1997]

I have done a first pass on making a soccer template for the FLO and as such was wondering if there were any large issues with it such as the proportions that should be fixed before I progress any further with it.
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Don't button up the shirt the whole way, you nerd!

I personally like it. Maybe the shorts are a little too puffy considering the compactness of the rest of the shirt itself?

 

[El_Scorcho]

Proportions aren't too bad at all. I would bring the waist of the shorts in just a tad so it looks like they are going under the shirt as opposed to that line looking like the seam of a bodysuit.

 

[Dylan8]

Too many buttons imo

 

[Greater Gattsby]

Too many buttons imo

Agreed, I'd have 3 buttons max

 

[SC_GC]

Thanks for the feedback, made changes to the collar and shorts based upon those suggestions.

 

[Fizzler]

What if we had a competition entry feedback thread. It could help out the contestants to get better designs and it could also help out comp runners figure out who goes in what division.

 

[El_Scorcho]

What if we had a competition entry feedback thread. It could help out the contestants to get better designs and it could also help out comp runners figure out who goes in what division.

This sort of thing could definitely go in the preseason thread of that particular comp.

"Hey, this is what i'm working on, give me some honest feedback"

Obviously a few people will be creating new templates or adapting their footy template for the FLO, so it might be a really good time to do this sort of thing.

I'm quite happy with my soccer template, but i'm having some issues on the design side of things, wanting to keep it simple like all good soccer kits are, while at the same time wanting to do something interesting that will get votes. It's a lot easier in Aussie Rules where big and guernsey dominating designs are standard fare

 

[Cody_]

New layout:

 

[Dylan8]

New layout:
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fyi

you've got 3 stripes on the socks and the nike logo

 

[Cody_]

fyi

you've got 3 stripes on the socks and the nike logo

so your a sock expert now?

 

[Fizzler]

so your a sock expert now?

Well since he made theses socks, and it's fairly obvious that that is an adidas thing, you don't really need to be a sock expert.

 

[Cody_]

Well since he made theses socks, and it's fairly obvious that that is an adidas thing, you don't really need to be a sock expert.

#dylansocks

 

[Jack Stevens]

Old memes never die

 

[Dylan8]

Well meme'd friend

 

[pantskyle]

Alright, so here is the evolution of all my templates:
Started with the filthy gradients:
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Continued with filthy gradients:
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Before I retraced everything and started again:
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With gradients still existent:
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I started to incorporate gradients a bit betterView attachment 187835
I decided to scrap them:
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then make shading:
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and finally made; new shading, new colours, new shorts, new socks and new presentation:
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Both the Eagles ones are absolutely amazing.

 

[mfcrox]

Okay... here is a link to my PHOTOSHOP template (albeit, a VERY watered down version of it):
- https://www.dropbox.com/s/byl5693r3xeppcr/MFCROX Photoshop Template.psd?dl=0

It is 29MB in size (My full one is a shade under 200MB), but it includes:
- Front on view of the player in short sleeve guernsey (sorry, no rear view)
- All manufacturer templates (collars, stitching, labels, etc.)
- All current AFL club home guernseys (sorry, no away/clash guernseys)
- All sponsors on front of home guernseys
- Solid and hooped socks



Essentially, it looks like the above... but, given that it is Photoshop, a lot of it can be tinkered with to your own liking. There is enough base shapes (stripes, yokes, hoops, chevons, sashes, etc.) to do whatever you want really. To change the base colour of the guernsey you'll have to go into the 'Guernsey Base' folder, and change the colour overlay. Likewise with the shorts. Most things can change colour with 'Colour overlay'.


Enjoy