Workshop Toolamba Jumper Design

[CAB12]

Cory that looks wicked, I would get rid of the vertical stripes jumper and do an alternate of the horizontal for the home. Logo looks sweet as well but stay either horizontal or vertical and atm your vertical looks better.

Oh and BTW your little watermark 'approvel' should be 'approval'
Good design man

 

[Willo #6]

Love the logo Cory

The colour difference between the front and back of the clash might be a little confusing though...
And would numbers work/fit in the home?

 

[Sepul]

I'd tweak a few things about it (the French Flag home and the dark front/light back of the clash), but otherwise it's the best that;s been submitted so far.

 

[Cory]

Toolamba Updated Design​

 

[Sepul]

Much better. Though the home looks like the Doggies, but I'm OK with that.

 

[Cory]

Much better. Though the home looks like the Doggies, but I'm OK with that.

Doesn't matter it's for a Junior League Mate ,Also thanks for the Comments

 

[CAB12]

That looks epic Cory. I love it. All goes together now nicely and colour are layed out awesome. Well done

 

[pie_machine]

The 'Toolamba Toros' jumper ('Toro' being Spanish for 'bull' and creating alliteration in the team name) is largely based on Melbourne's highly revered jumper, with the colours reversed and a slight white vee introduced, similar to the blue vee on Melbourne's new clash jumper.

This design is a relatively traditional yet unique one, composed of vertical and horizontal lines, two of which form a T (for Toolamba). Also, Toolamba (with the local 'Junction Hotel') is the site of a rail junction, which could be seen to be represented in the intersection of the vertical and horizontal lines.

The 'Toolamba Titans' also has alliteration, and the jumper uses two crossed swords to form a vee.

An alternative Titans design features a large sword, which could also be seen as a stylised T.

Alliteration aside, a fitting name would seem to be the 'Toolamba Lambs'...

...however, lambs do not seem that threatening as a mascot for a sporting team. Instead, the polar opposite would be a wolf.


Personally, I prefer the first three designs.

 

[E92_]

based off the saints preseason jumper last year, dunno what logo you want so i left the white part clear.

 

[Sepul]

This design is a relatively traditional yet unique one, composed of vertical and horizontal lines, two of which form a T (for Toolamba). Also, Toolamba (with the local 'Junction Hotel') is the site of a rail junction, which could be seen to be represented in the intersection of the vertical and horizontal lines.

This is the best of them IMO, looks great (not a fan of that shade of red though). Plus it means you can go with any nickname, alliterative or not.

 

[Craegus]

Here is my first attempt, don't know if I will do any more (will depend on if I have any more ideas).

 

[the heat]

Here is my first attempt, don't know if I will do any more (will depend on if I have any more ideas).

Its good, the backs a little busy though