These are hypothetical kids... a combination of different traits I've come across over the years. Not a bad effort on your behalf being a non-teacher. You would be supported to rewrite the comments though as "very bright" would be considered too much of an opinion and your focus on Emily's deficits would be frowned upon.Wow! How to remain constructive?
1) Freddy is very bright and will do even better when he engages fully with all tasks and projects.
2) Emily tries her best but is finding difficulty in some areas. Please contact me to arrange a private discussion.
My wife was a teacher for over 30 years and would do way better for sure. How old are the kids?








