SugarShane
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A lot of stories seem to be going that way (not just Crowy's). Far too concerned with adding jokes and similes on every line and trying to sound like a literary genius.This. The basic premise of getting caught up with the ex and the new bird at a cafe probably happened. All the extraneous details though, like what he had for breaky, his coffee, that his gf didn't use Beats headphones, just made it verbose and annoying to read. I feel that's been a problem with a few stories in here lately; people trying a little too hard to make their story funny or interesting.