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I like Jen's straight to the point approach. As George Orwell said in his writing tips -'Never use a long word when a short one will do'. Also 'if it's possible to cut a word out then cut it out'. Keep it simple. We are not all Rhodes scholars.
By the same token, it's good to extend your capabilities. As far as I am concerned, I am just grateful to have someone doing this work, let alone two with extra contributions from others when they can get there. I like having two different styles, and I look forward to examining Annabelle's work for the additional pleasure of seeing if I agree with her use of words. (I don't always), How lucky we are.
 
I like Jen's straight to the point approach. As George Orwell said in his writing tips -'Never use a long word when a short one will do'. Also 'if it's possible to cut a word out then cut it out'. Keep it simple. We are not all Rhodes scholars.
... but some of us undoubtedly are.
 

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By the same token, it's good to extend your capabilities. As far as I am concerned, I am just grateful to have someone doing this work, let alone two with extra contributions from others when they can get there. I like having two different styles, and I look forward to examining Annabelle's work for the additional pleasure of seeing if I agree with her use of words. (I don't always), How lucky we are.
I don't disagree. I read them all.
 
By the same token, it's good to extend your capabilities. As far as I am concerned, I am just grateful to have someone doing this work, let alone two with extra contributions from others when they can get there. I like having two different styles, and I look forward to examining Annabelle's work for the additional pleasure of seeing if I agree with her use of words. (I don't always), How lucky we are.
Annabelle doesn’t do anything by halves.
 
BTW, I've spent decades teaching writing, but I wouldn't dare offer an uninvited critique of others' writing.

I'm just really grateful to people like Jen, Annabelle et al for letting me know how the players are going.
 
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"The elements of style" -by William Shrunk is a great guide to writing, especially is you're looking at a concise approach.
Before the world turned all nice and PC, a mean law firm partner with a red pen was a good way to learn how to cut back on words. I remember one boss asking me something along the lines of, "What is this sh-t? Reads like a police report. You're not a f-ing cop are you? So don't write like one." That it was a legal letter on a commercial matter made the cop line particularly insulting.
 

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Good evening all- this is my first post on Big Footy and I am delighted to be a part of such a respected community of posters.

My name is 'Warburton Lad' and I am a long time contributor to Nick's Collingwood Page.
I am a lifelong Collingwood Member and supporter.

In the past, I have done numerous pre-season updates on Nick's to keep fans of the Black-and-White in the loop about how our team is shaping up. More recently, I have not been able to grace training with my presence (health issues, predominantly) but I take great joy from getting down there when I can.

I am bullish about our prospects in 2024- I don't think we are 'defending' our flag rather, we have a new challenge for this group to stare down and give it our best collective efforts.

I think that 2024 will see a number of senior players truly challenged by 'Next-Gen' Magpies: Carmichael, Allan, Macrae, Begg, Harrison, McInnes, Johnson, and, perhaps: Steene, Dean, De Mattea. I can forsee a possibility that we could have a 2010 like season where Fraser, Medhurst, O'Bree and Lockyer were surpassed by others on the list who became Premiership players under Malthouse.

I do not, for one moment, believe that McRae, Leppitsch, Bolton et al will be swayed by sentimentality in pursuit of our 17th Flag.

To paraphrase a former Australian Prime Minister, for Collingwood to be the first Club to a 17th Flag would be, "The Sweetest Premiership of all..."

I wish all Big Footy posters a very enjoyable season and wish for them success (however that may look for them).

I promise to be a respectful and considered poster and will treat my fellow posters with courtesy and politeness at all times.

Floreat Pica.
 
Good evening all- this is my first post on Big Footy and I am delighted to be a part of such a respected community of posters.

My name is 'Warburton Lad' and I am a long time contributor to Nick's Collingwood Page.
I am a lifelong Collingwood Member and supporter.

In the past, I have done numerous pre-season updates on Nick's to keep fans of the Black-and-White in the loop about how our team is shaping up. More recently, I have not been able to grace training with my presence (health issues, predominantly) but I take great joy from getting down there when I can.

I am bullish about our prospects in 2024- I don't think we are 'defending' our flag rather, we have a new challenge for this group to stare down and give it our best collective efforts.

I think that 2024 will see a number of senior players truly challenged by 'Next-Gen' Magpies: Carmichael, Allan, Macrae, Begg, Harrison, McInnes, Johnson, and, perhaps: Steene, Dean, De Mattea. I can forsee a possibility that we could have a 2010 like season where Fraser, Medhurst, O'Bree and Lockyer were surpassed by others on the list who became Premiership players under Malthouse.

I do not, for one moment, believe that McRae, Leppitsch, Bolton et al will be swayed by sentimentality in pursuit of our 17th Flag.

To paraphrase a former Australian Prime Minister, for Collingwood to be the first Club to a 17th Flag would be, "The Sweetest Premiership of all..."

I wish all Big Footy posters a very enjoyable season and wish for them success (however that may look for them).

I promise to be a respectful and considered poster and will treat my fellow posters with courtesy and politeness at all times.

Floreat Pica.
Hello WL!
I know you have been a long time supporter of the mighty Pies, and a long time contributor to Nick's, so it's a great pleasure to see you here.
Floreat Pica indeed!
 

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Good evening all- this is my first post on Big Footy and I am delighted to be a part of such a respected community of posters.

My name is 'Warburton Lad' and I am a long time contributor to Nick's Collingwood Page.
I am a lifelong Collingwood Member and supporter.

In the past, I have done numerous pre-season updates on Nick's to keep fans of the Black-and-White in the loop about how our team is shaping up. More recently, I have not been able to grace training with my presence (health issues, predominantly) but I take great joy from getting down there when I can.

I am bullish about our prospects in 2024- I don't think we are 'defending' our flag rather, we have a new challenge for this group to stare down and give it our best collective efforts.

I think that 2024 will see a number of senior players truly challenged by 'Next-Gen' Magpies: Carmichael, Allan, Macrae, Begg, Harrison, McInnes, Johnson, and, perhaps: Steene, Dean, De Mattea. I can forsee a possibility that we could have a 2010 like season where Fraser, Medhurst, O'Bree and Lockyer were surpassed by others on the list who became Premiership players under Malthouse.

I do not, for one moment, believe that McRae, Leppitsch, Bolton et al will be swayed by sentimentality in pursuit of our 17th Flag.

To paraphrase a former Australian Prime Minister, for Collingwood to be the first Club to a 17th Flag would be, "The Sweetest Premiership of all..."

I wish all Big Footy posters a very enjoyable season and wish for them success (however that may look for them).

I promise to be a respectful and considered poster and will treat my fellow posters with courtesy and politeness at all times.

Floreat Pica.
I know your work well from Nicks.You’re a great contributor to that board.Welcome to Bigfooty Warburton Lad.😀
 
Good evening all- this is my first post on Big Footy and I am delighted to be a part of such a respected community of posters.

My name is 'Warburton Lad' and I am a long time contributor to Nick's Collingwood Page.
I am a lifelong Collingwood Member and supporter.

In the past, I have done numerous pre-season updates on Nick's to keep fans of the Black-and-White in the loop about how our team is shaping up. More recently, I have not been able to grace training with my presence (health issues, predominantly) but I take great joy from getting down there when I can.

I am bullish about our prospects in 2024- I don't think we are 'defending' our flag rather, we have a new challenge for this group to stare down and give it our best collective efforts.

I think that 2024 will see a number of senior players truly challenged by 'Next-Gen' Magpies: Carmichael, Allan, Macrae, Begg, Harrison, McInnes, Johnson, and, perhaps: Steene, Dean, De Mattea. I can forsee a possibility that we could have a 2010 like season where Fraser, Medhurst, O'Bree and Lockyer were surpassed by others on the list who became Premiership players under Malthouse.

I do not, for one moment, believe that McRae, Leppitsch, Bolton et al will be swayed by sentimentality in pursuit of our 17th Flag.

To paraphrase a former Australian Prime Minister, for Collingwood to be the first Club to a 17th Flag would be, "The Sweetest Premiership of all..."

I wish all Big Footy posters a very enjoyable season and wish for them success (however that may look for them).

I promise to be a respectful and considered poster and will treat my fellow posters with courtesy and politeness at all times.

Floreat Pica.
Welcome, WL!

I've greatly enjoyed your thoughts on the lads in the past.

I am quietly excited to see what 2024 brings too.
 
BTW, I've spent decades teaching writing, but I wouldn't dare offer an uninvited critique of others' writing.

I'm just really grateful to people like Jen, Annabelle et al for letting me know how the players are going.

Agree completely. Unsolicited uninvited book reviews are rude and insulting.
 
Thank you Mr Hardas and others for the lovely sentiments expressed and welcome extended.
I cannot think of another season where there is such a 'buzz' around our prospects.

In my view, the best Collingwood sides I have witnessed are, in order: 1970, 2011, 2023 and 1972.
The sobering reality form that is that the Magpies only won one flag from those four years.

I once had a long chat with Mr Des Tuddenham and he was certain that if the Magpie lists in 1970 and 1972 had the fitness levels of the Richmond sides of that era, they may well have won Bobby Rose several flags.

For younger readers of Big Footy, at the end of 1971, Teddy went to Captain-Coach Essendon, in early 1972 our finest young player John Greening was knocked unconscious well off the ball by a St Kilda player and missed the remainder of the season and, a fine young Victorian from our recruiting zone had chosen to go to Norwood in the SANFL.

Imagine the Magpies in the 1972 finals with a half forward line of Greening, Carman and Tuddenham...??

Such is life.
 
Good evening all- this is my first post on Big Footy and I am delighted to be a part of such a respected community of posters.

My name is 'Warburton Lad' and I am a long time contributor to Nick's Collingwood Page.
I am a lifelong Collingwood Member and supporter.

In the past, I have done numerous pre-season updates on Nick's to keep fans of the Black-and-White in the loop about how our team is shaping up. More recently, I have not been able to grace training with my presence (health issues, predominantly) but I take great joy from getting down there when I can.

I am bullish about our prospects in 2024- I don't think we are 'defending' our flag rather, we have a new challenge for this group to stare down and give it our best collective efforts.

I think that 2024 will see a number of senior players truly challenged by 'Next-Gen' Magpies: Carmichael, Allan, Macrae, Begg, Harrison, McInnes, Johnson, and, perhaps: Steene, Dean, De Mattea. I can forsee a possibility that we could have a 2010 like season where Fraser, Medhurst, O'Bree and Lockyer were surpassed by others on the list who became Premiership players under Malthouse.

I do not, for one moment, believe that McRae, Leppitsch, Bolton et al will be swayed by sentimentality in pursuit of our 17th Flag.

To paraphrase a former Australian Prime Minister, for Collingwood to be the first Club to a 17th Flag would be, "The Sweetest Premiership of all..."

I wish all Big Footy posters a very enjoyable season and wish for them success (however that may look for them).

I promise to be a respectful and considered poster and will treat my fellow posters with courtesy and politeness at all times.

Floreat Pica.
Mate, we were just talking about you the other day. I was certain you’d posted here before, but maybe my memory is playing weird tricks on me.
 
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