I've got a project due tomorrow, and if possible it would be great to get someone to read over it. Its only 132 words (I'm only in year 9).
I'm pretty sure most of the words are out of order (as in wrong grammar) but my teacher won't be hard on that.
It is in Indonesian then English (so it's easy to translate).
Tanggal 7 Mei
Date 7 May
Ken yang baik
Dear Ken
Apa kabar? Saya baik-baik saja. Mudah-mudahan kamu baik juga.
How are you? I am very good. Hopefully you are good also.
Terima kasih untuk surat kamu. Saya maunya sekali untuk kamu pergi ke Melbourne dan kunjungan di rumah saya.
Thank you for your letter. I would like for you to go to Melbourne and stay at my house.
Hari ini cuaca cerah dan suhu enam belas derajat Celsius. Kami sekarang musim gugur. Dingin sekali pada pagi. Cuaca dan suhu sama pada Juni, pada dingin tetapi.
Today the weather is bright and clear and the temperature is 16 degrees Celsius. We are now in autumn. It is very cold in the morning. The weather and temperature is the same in June, but it is winter.
Saya akan mengambil kamu ke futbul ke menoton saya tim nama St Kilda. Saya juga bermain futbul pada Hari Minggu. Saya tim nama (prefer not to say).
I will take you to the football to watch my team called St Kilda. I also play football on Sunday. My teams called (prefer not so say).
Kamu perlu ke mengambilkan pakain untuk cuaca dingin. Saya menyarankan kamu mengambilkan undi pakian hangat seperti peloncat-peloncat dan jas hujan.
You need to bring clothes for cold weather. I suggest you bring warm clothes like jumpers and a raincoat.
Apa cuaca ada di Indonesia pada Juni? Serkarang musim hujan atau musim kemarau.
What is the weather there in Indonesia in June? Is it the rainy season or dry season now?
Saya maunya untuk kamu pergi kunjungan di saya rumah pada Juni.
I would like for you to go stay at my house in June.
Baik salam,
Liam.
Kind Regards, Liam.
I'm pretty sure most of the words are out of order (as in wrong grammar) but my teacher won't be hard on that.
It is in Indonesian then English (so it's easy to translate).
Tanggal 7 Mei
Date 7 May
Ken yang baik
Dear Ken
Apa kabar? Saya baik-baik saja. Mudah-mudahan kamu baik juga.
How are you? I am very good. Hopefully you are good also.
Terima kasih untuk surat kamu. Saya maunya sekali untuk kamu pergi ke Melbourne dan kunjungan di rumah saya.
Thank you for your letter. I would like for you to go to Melbourne and stay at my house.
Hari ini cuaca cerah dan suhu enam belas derajat Celsius. Kami sekarang musim gugur. Dingin sekali pada pagi. Cuaca dan suhu sama pada Juni, pada dingin tetapi.
Today the weather is bright and clear and the temperature is 16 degrees Celsius. We are now in autumn. It is very cold in the morning. The weather and temperature is the same in June, but it is winter.
Saya akan mengambil kamu ke futbul ke menoton saya tim nama St Kilda. Saya juga bermain futbul pada Hari Minggu. Saya tim nama (prefer not to say).
I will take you to the football to watch my team called St Kilda. I also play football on Sunday. My teams called (prefer not so say).
Kamu perlu ke mengambilkan pakain untuk cuaca dingin. Saya menyarankan kamu mengambilkan undi pakian hangat seperti peloncat-peloncat dan jas hujan.
You need to bring clothes for cold weather. I suggest you bring warm clothes like jumpers and a raincoat.
Apa cuaca ada di Indonesia pada Juni? Serkarang musim hujan atau musim kemarau.
What is the weather there in Indonesia in June? Is it the rainy season or dry season now?
Saya maunya untuk kamu pergi kunjungan di saya rumah pada Juni.
I would like for you to go stay at my house in June.
Baik salam,
Liam.
Kind Regards, Liam.








