I think I might have said it earlier in this thread but instead of raising a question, try answering one. Instead of "Can the Bulldogs go all the way?" try making the premise of your article "The Bulldogs can go all the way - this is why." Give an opinion, back it up and most importantly entertain the reader. Tell me why the Bulldogs' midfield is "scarily good" with examples and statistics, don't just reel off names. I know their names, tell me more.
I don't want to be harsh but your writing hasn't changed so much from my occasional observations in this thread. Try putting some of the advice into practice before writing articles and posting them here.
Yep, I agree. Again, don't want to be harsh, but are you actually taking the advice on board and trying to implement those improvements?
This latest piece is still too general and doesn't offer much more than casual observations. Be specific, and incorporate stats and examples.
And avoid repetition of words and phrases like the use of 'year' three times in the space of 24 words:
The Western Bulldogs had a marvellous first year under new coach Luke Beveridge, going from 14th the previous year to playing finals. The year finished in a elimination final loss to Adelaide in a classic at the MCG. It was the fairytale of 2015.